Introduction to Poetry

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In Billy Collins’ “Introduction to Poetry” (The Seagull Reader), he explains how poems should be analyzed. Collins is a Professor of English at Lehman College where he’s taught for over thirty years. The speaker seems to be Collins himself (or the Professor side of him), with the audience (his students?) as anyone who has ever analyzed poetry. The poem is written in free verse with seven stanzas; three are tercets, three are couplets, and one as a single line stanza. This piece is pretty straightforward, filled with metaphors and humor. I’ve nicknamed this the “metaphor poem” – and writing this blog, I couldn’t think of a more fitting poem for this assignment.

In the first stanza, the poem is compared to a color slide because they are dark and hard to decipher at first, but after we “hold it up to the light,” the image is better seen. With poetry, it’s the same way. At first read, poems can be mystifying, vague, and cryptic, but after additional read throughs, they become more sensible – the light to the color slide.

The second stanza urge readers to “press an ear against its hive.” This is the only stanza with a single line, meaning Collins really wants the audience to take time to analyze it. Here, the hive is a metaphor for sounds that poems can create, informing the audience that the auditory sense is relevant to analyzing poetry. In this case, hives make me think of bees and their buzzing sound. The words “press,” “against,” and “its” in this stanza gives this buzzing quality, which illustrates the speaker’s point.

The mouse is a metaphor for poetry’s composition in the third stanza. As the mouse roams, it touches all parts of the poem, creating structure and form – the composition. When the mouse “probe his way out,” it represents our initial understanding; our first thoughts and interpretations of the poem.

The light switch in the fourth stanza is a metaphor for comprehension. If it’s turned off, then we don’t know the poem’s meaning. When the light switch is turned on, then we have some understanding – like light in a dark room, it provides awareness and guidance.

When the speaker encourages the reader to “water-ski across the surface of a poem” in the fifth stanza, he advocates poetry immersion, and making the reading experience a visceral one, which aligns with its purpose: full enjoyment of the experience. Plus, by being less in our heads, the meaning of the poem might come sooner. The mention of “the author’s name on the shore” refers to a thoughtful nod to the poet.

On the sixth stanza, the poem takes a darker tone. The speaker says that readers like to “tie the poem to a chair with rope / and torture a confession out of it.”  The rope is a metaphor for restriction, and when we torture a poem to get its meaning, it’s actually preventing or “restricting” us from achieving that. The overall reference is to many readers propensity in forcing meaning out of poetry as opposed to letting it naturally surface. Collins put this stanza right after the one before it because he wants to accentuate the contrast: what to do, what not to do.

In the last stanza, the poem continues its violent streak: “They begin beating it with a hose / to find out what it really means.” I equate hose with water, suffocation, drowning. At this point, the audience desperately wants the meaning behind the poem, but by using a hose, the message is drowned out and has floated away because of the aggressive approach – the antithesis of the speaker’s intent.

The lesson here is that poetry interpretation should be a visceral, natural, and unforced experience. It should also be an enjoyable and positive one as well, because that’s the best way to learn what poetry has to teach. We can accomplish this by thoughtfully using our senses and immersing ourselves. Sadly, the darker ending suggests the speaker has had a difficult time expressing this lesson to his audience. The hope then really comes down to each reader. If we’re able to take value away from this poem and wisely apply it to future poetry readings, then the speaker has achieved his goal.

I wonder: Has “Introduction to Poetry” taught you any new techniques about interpretation? If so, what is it, and how do you plan on using it?


17 Comments on “Introduction to Poetry”

  1. theblume says:

    I too really enjoyed this poem. I liked all the use of metaphors because I think they do a better job of getting a point across when used correctly. I especially liked your interpretation of his word choice in using “press,” “against,” and “its” to allude to the buzzing of a hive. When I read the ending sections I was reminded of the saying:” poetry is meant to be digested not dissected.”

  2. I love this poem and all it represents. Collins gets to the heart of what drives me bonkers about literary analysis (though not with this group!): when the reader mucks about too much with the source material, and forgets to simply enjoy the damn art as it is. I believe there is (obviously) merit in analysis, but the focal point should always be appreciation (I.e., letting the work affect you naturally). Literature doesn’t have to be liked, or heralded, or even coherent–but it should elicit a reaction, for better or worse. That first key reaction should be the bridge to all other interpretation, which informs the reader more about THEMSELVES, the whole point of art in the first place.

    “We do not write to be understood, we write to understand.” – C. Day Lewis

    Also, here’s a laughable pic about literary over analysis:
    http://maillotolivier.tumblr.com/image/11860082542

    • kbehre says:

      Tim, I see that pic all over the place, but I take issue with it because it assumes, like many people who haven’t studied literature, that authorial intent is the holy grail of literary interpretation and analysis. BUT IT’S NOT!!

      • Haha, I agree Keri, really. But I still can’t help but see the humor in it! The author is of course not the end-all for analysis, but I also think there are too many liberties taken when analyzing (in certain settings! Again, not with this group!), so that the analysis can sink into pretentious obscurity. I think you have to maintain a little bit of objectivity when analyzing art, and be aware of when you’ve veered off the track and head towards a cliff’s edge.

      • kbehre says:

        Tim, I hear what you’re saying, though I think that the idea of “objectivity” is dangerous. (Wouldn’t the teacher in this argument claim to have the objective answer, and isn’t that exactly the problem?)

        I’ll also admit that some of my !!! comes from the fact that this pic has been posted on my Facebook wall far too many times. ;)

    • vonepho says:

      Both this picture (which I’ve seen before) and this conversation is cracking me up. I’m pretty entertained. This would be an interesting conversation to have on one of our twitter nights.

  3. “The lesson here is that poetry interpretation should be a visceral, natural, and unforced experience. It should also be an enjoyable and positive one as well, because that’s the best way to learn what poetry has to teach. We can accomplish this by thoughtfully using our senses and immersing ourselves.”

    Where was this when I was in high school? I feel like too often poetry becomes the nightmare lesson in school because you have to dissect every word, every line, and it feels more like you cut a photo into teeny tiny pieces then just enjoyed it as a whole. That is why I love our group and second what Tim said. It is great to appreciate the art and not always perform literary surgery.

    • vonepho says:

      I absolutely agree. Without pressure, immersion tends to happen a lot easier, which, of course, creates more enjoyment of the poetry experience. Part of it too has a lot to do with poems we get to study, because if there’s a relatable quality, then that makes a difference in our opinions.

  4. carrieglovka says:

    This is such a thorough analysis and is so well done! I especially like your nickname of the “the metaphor poem”. I love how the use of metaphors in his poem create such strong, tangible images. This was one of my favorite poems this week. I love how it is both beautifully written with a touch of humor. The beauty of the poem is conveyed especially in this line (for me) “walk inside the poems room and feel the walls for a light switch”. The humor is conveyed throuhout the entire poem such as “tie the poem to a chair with rope and torture a confession out of it”. I also found the poem did a great job of showing the very different objectives between professors and students analytical techniques.

    • vonepho says:

      Thanks, Carrie. I added the nickname to play along with Collins humor. All the metaphors did give this poem an absurd and funny tone. My favorite lines are: “I want them to water-ski / across the surface of a poem” because it refers to that visceral quality of poetry/literature that I wish I could experience in every poem I read. Unfortunately, that doesn’t happen often enough.

  5. kbehre says:

    Great post, Vone. Your words evoke (to me) a conversation we had earlier this term — about lenses, and how we all bring our own unique perspectives to a text. In a way, the darker portion of the poem represents the quest for a single meaning, but the speaker (whom I’ve always read as a student, interestingly) is encouraging readers to spend enough quiet time with poetry to consider deeply what a poem means personally. There is no confession to be heard, because the meaning of a poem dwells in us.

    • vonepho says:

      I remember that conversation. I think it’s the week I read “The New Dress.” There was heavy discussion on the Mabel Waring character.

      I love your last comment: “…the meaning of a poem dwells in us” because it’s so true. Poetry/Literature is worthwhile to us only if we want it to be. A lot has to with each particular piece, and if we’re able to extract something meaningful from it. Some pieces speak louder to me than others, and that can elevate or discourage my emotional investment.

  6. Vone, your analysis of this poem is so thoughtful and line by line that it leaves me almost without much to add. I think that the buzzing of the bees was brilliant. I kept thinking about the multi-layered intricacy of a hive and the way that the bees work together toward a common purpose. It is only by pulling it apart that you find the meat (the honey). Collins’ almost overuse of metaphors is such a fun change from some of the other poems we have been reading. It definitely gives a lot of food for thought.

    • vonepho says:

      Thanks, Megan. Touche: I love your analysis. It’s such a great explanation of the hive metaphor, and so applicable to Collins poem. In a way, all our poems are hives, and we’re all the bees, pulling it apart (analyzing our poems) to get the honey. It’s kind of neat.


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